One day Andria was in the woods. No one could find her. She
was riding a horse and trying to find her way back.
Her
father, Yunk was upset. The she heard howling and it sounded like her dog
Links. Then she yelled, “Links! Links! Links!”
Andria
is a hunter. She wears a cloak every day so she won’t show her face. Andria’s
dad, Yunk was worried so they went on a hunt to search.
Dear Malaya,
ReplyDeleteI wonder if Andria was LOST in the woods - you said "no one could find her" and "she was riding a horse and TRYING TO FIND HER WAY BACK" You left me wanting to know more about what happened - does she find her way back?? I hope you add more to this story so that I can learn how it ends.
You have made an interesting story - you make me want to know more.
Good job, Malaya.