Thursday, May 1, 2014

Elliana

            The Mint is money. The money is sent to the bank. Whenever people get a bank account they give the money to them. They check it before the people get the money. What I learned was the money goes to the bank.

            There is a place where they make money. It is called the mint. They polish it and design it. People have some of this money. I learned that they make money in the mint.

7 comments:

  1. Your writing is very interesting, and the words you chose made it easy to imagine people making money at the mint. Good job!

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  2. Pretend the Mint has hired you, Elliana, to design some new money. What materials would you choose to make this money? Would you put a picture of a famous person or an animal on the money, or something else?

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  3. Good writing Elly! You really worked hard on this project.

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  4. Hi Elliana,

    I enjoyed reading this. I wonder who checks the money before it is given to the people and who checks the money before it is given tot the bank. Do you know?

    Megan

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  5. You explained where money comes from and how it gets to people in a very easy to understand way. It was good to read what you learned from your lesson. Keep practicing.

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  6. You explained where money starts out and how it gets to people in a a brief and easy to understand way. It was interesting to read about what you learned. Keep practicing your writing!

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  7. Nice work! Your writing makes me want to learn more about the mint. Did you enjoy learning about the mint? What was your favorite part?

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