Would you like have a Power jump of towers and not die? Would you like to see people as you go down and just have fun? Make people say “WOW”.
Would you like to change your hands into claws open cans without a knife! I would help people so they don't get hurt. I would have armor for free. I would have silver armor.
I would be able to just Pop it on. I would be very light. I would take it anywhere. I would Put it on super fast.
Point: The words in the short sentences in the last paragraph are successful in conveying the sense of speed. You use good action phrases "pop it on" and "super fast."
ReplyDeleteQuestion: I'd like to know more about where you would wear the armor. Would it only be on the power jump?
Point: You have done some good thinking about what some of the problems might be of having silver armor. It would work better if it were very light, and you could pop it on super fast, and if it were free.
ReplyDeleteQuestion: Which do you think would be the most fun part of having silver super armor? Helping people, not getting hurt, or having people say, "WOW"?
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