Thursday, November 3, 2011

Mikey

There was a super fero named Mix. Mix was yellow. He went to a school. His super power is to be the popular kid in school and to solve problems.

He went to school at Rigler. He went to school in 1980s. January first he went with his cousin named Izzman car with Spinners with spikes.

Mix made kids popular and solved problems in school. He changes colors every time he sees someone sad.

2 comments:

  1. Point: Mikey, It's great to hear that Mix likes to solve problems. I'm an engineer and I solve problems everyday too. I especially like this sentence that you wrote about changing colors when he sees a sad person.

    "He changes colors every time he sees someone sad."

    Question: You wrote that Mix was yellow. What color do you think he changes to when he sees a sad person?

    Mr. W.

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  2. Hi Mikey!

    Point: I really like the sentence that you wrote that told me that Mix's super power is being the popular kid and solving problems. It was an important detail that helped me to understand Mix's character. "His super power is to be the popular kid in school and to solve problems."

    Question: What types of problems has Mix solved in school?

    Ms. P.

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