Crows are fabulous creatures even though you may not like them. Crows are loud and they squawk. If you have seen a crow what I bet you have, have you wondered what they eat, sleep, do, and play? Crows have many talents and gifts like. When they find a nut that they can’t open, They fly to a wire sit there and drop the nut. This usually breaks it open. If this doesn’t work, they will find a little pebble and start to crush it.
Have you seen crows in flecks? When you see crows in flecks it means you are seeing a family of crows. When are babies they learn the things they need to learn, but when there bigger they don’t leave the nest they help their mom with her new babies!! Crows are known for working together with their family.
Crows eat lots of yucky things. This might sand disgusting but crows eat dead animals, vegetables, trash and much more.
Crows sleep in the best part of the trees. There they can look out for danger that might be coming. When crows sleep they put their head under their wings and go to sleep. When crows saw a predator they fly and chase it away. Hawks and Eagles tend to leave crows alone. Crows are big black feathered birds that are ever everywhere.
POINT: I LIKE THE VERY FIRST SENTENCE. IT TELLS ME NOT ONLY ABOUT WHAT THE ESSAY IS ABOUT BUT ALSO HOW YOU, THE WRITER FEELS ABOUT THE SUBJECT. THAT MAKES IT EASIER TO UNDERSTAND EVERYTHING ELSE IN THE ESSAY AND THAT WAY I LIKE READING THE WHOLE THING EVEN MORE. " Crows are fabulous creatures even though you may not like them"
ReplyDeleteQUESTION: I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW MORE ABOUT WHAT CROWS EAT.
MR. RUNGBY
Point: I liked your first sentence. It really caught my attention and I wanted to read more. I don't think I've ever heard someone describe crows the way you did: "Crows are fabulous creatures even though you may not like them."
ReplyDeleteQuestion: How come eagles and hawks leave crows alone? What animals prey upon crows?
Abbey
Hi Kiran,
ReplyDeleteI think the best part is that you show what you mean by giving examples. "Crows have many talents and gifts like. When they find a nut that they can’t open, They fly to a wire sit there and drop the nut." This is a very important part of good writing.
My question is, what other ways can you help people to like crows?
Monique