Wednesday, November 16, 2011

Armando

Tiger

Have you ever seen a Tiger? Will I did. You need food to give to the tiger. Then you need a glove because they could got your hand. Then they will eat your hand. Then you wont have a hand. Then you wont have a hand any more. Then you need water because it will be so hot. You need money because you need to go on a canteen. The Tiger will eat you, the tiger then will kill and you wont see the Baby. The end.

2 comments:

  1. Point: This is a pretty scary story. A tiger eating you all up. I don't think I would want to feed a tiger with my hand, or to feed my hand to a tiger.

    Question: Did you know that tigers are good swimmers?

    Crossing Rebecca

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  2. Point: You've given the reader some very important advice on protecting one's hands before feeding a tiger: "you need a glove because they could got your hand."

    Question: Who is the Baby? Did you see the Baby?

    Abbey

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