I am an expert at painting houses. When I don’t have school. I go with my dad to work to paint houses and pick up the garbage. I have painted garages, houses and doors. After I am done. I go to Burger King to eat.
Adan, I am truly impressed that you are an expert at painting houses. You are such a good boy. I'm sure your dad is very grateful and proud of you for accompanying him to work and helping him out.
Oh you love eating at Burger King. What do you always order when you go there?
Adan: This is a lovely story about your experience painting. I'm interested in hearing more about what makes you an expert painter. Are there techniques that you can share with the readers of this blog?
Hi Adan, This is the first time I am helping your teacher on this blog, so I hope I am doing it right. I want to tell you that I am impressed by your use of commas in making a list about what you and your dad paint. But I am worried that perhaps you are not using commas in the right spot. It seems like you broke up two sentences with periods instead of commas. It would make more sense if it said, "When I don’t have school, [comma] I go with my dad to work to paint houses and pick up the garbage." See how that's different? I hope that helps you become a better writer! Keep up the good work!
Sounds interesting, Adan. I have done some painting in my own house, but I have never painted anyone else's house. That's just like a real job! Knowing how to paint could really come in handy when you are older and need a summer job.
And you get paid by going to Burger King! What is your favorite thing to order at Burger King?
Point: Hi Adan, I was interested to read that when you don't have school you go with your dad to paint garages and pick up garbage. "When I don't have school, I go with my dad to work to paint houses and pick up the garbage."
The reason that I was interested to read this is because this described in detail what you do, when you do it, and with whom you do it, so there was a lot of information in one sentence.
Question: I would love to know more about your favorite things to paint - do you prefer to paint houses, garages or doors? Are there differences in the techniques to paint these three things, or can you paint them all in the same way?
Another thing I would be interested to know about is the type of garbage you collect. Do you clear up any trash that has been created during the painting? What do you do with the trash afterwards? Can any of it be recycled?
Thanks for sharing your story - I enjoyed it very much!
Adan, I am truly impressed that you are an expert at painting houses. You are such a good boy. I'm sure your dad is very grateful and proud of you for accompanying him to work and helping him out.
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Adan: This is a lovely story about your experience painting. I'm interested in hearing more about what makes you an expert painter. Are there techniques that you can share with the readers of this blog?
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Hi Adan,
ReplyDeleteThis is the first time I am helping your teacher on this blog, so I hope I am doing it right. I want to tell you that I am impressed by your use of commas in making a list about what you and your dad paint. But I am worried that perhaps you are not using commas in the right spot. It seems like you broke up two sentences with periods instead of commas. It would make more sense if it said, "When I don’t have school, [comma] I go with my dad to work to paint houses and pick up the garbage." See how that's different? I hope that helps you become a better writer! Keep up the good work!
Sounds interesting, Adan. I have done some painting in my own house, but I have never painted anyone else's house. That's just like a real job! Knowing how to paint could really come in handy when you are older and need a summer job.
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David
Point: Hi Adan, I was interested to read that when you don't have school you go with your dad to paint garages and pick up garbage. "When I don't have school, I go with my dad to work to paint houses and pick up the garbage."
ReplyDeleteThe reason that I was interested to read this is because this described in detail what you do, when you do it, and with whom you do it, so there was a lot of information in one sentence.
Question: I would love to know more about your favorite things to paint - do you prefer to paint houses, garages or doors? Are there differences in the techniques to paint these three things, or can you paint them all in the same way?
Another thing I would be interested to know about is the type of garbage you collect. Do you clear up any trash that has been created during the painting? What do you do with the trash afterwards? Can any of it be recycled?
Thanks for sharing your story - I enjoyed it very much!
All the best
Karen
adan:that is cool. i also like to paint houses.If you were to mack a bissnes what will it be called?
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