Olivia
Narrator:
The people in the apartment 2B wanted a house and not an apartment.
Mom:
I’m looking at houses on the computer.
Dad:The
kids are packing their stuff.
Narrator:
Finally the mom found a good house that had two floors and three beds.
(The
people get in the car.)
Mom:
Isn’t the house nice?
All:
Yes!
Narrator:
They all started unpacking. They got settled in, and they loved their new
house.
Girl:
I love this room. It’s so big.
Boy:
Me too.
Kids:
We’re going to unpack.
Mom:
Ok
Dad:
I like this house better than our old apartment.
Narrator:
once the people got settled they liked the house and wanted to stay.
Hi Olivia,
ReplyDeleteI just read your story and I was very impressed with how you described big life changes! Living in an apartment can feel crowded at times, and you really showed how a house is better suited for this family. Also, you are very good at expressing emotions through your characters. Nice job! Keep up the writing!
Best wishes,
Andrea
I like how you are good at saying that they like it!
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