Mason
Narrator:
Once sun and wind decided to make an ocean, but they (skipped)
different things to match.
Sun:
I think we should create an ocean on Earth.
Wind:
Where will we get the water?
Sun:
There is a mine with and sea plants and animals.
Seaweed:
Look sun and moon are coming.
Wind:
I will blow you in the water and sun will put the water in the ocean.
All
sea animals: Thank you.
Narrator:
So sun and wind created the ocean.
This is a lovely story and is a good example of two things working together, the sun and the wind. It reads like a poem. I can picture the wind blowing the sun into the water. You could practice writing so the reader can read all the words. Great work!
ReplyDeleteI like how you talk about the sun and wind make the sea
ReplyDeleteI like how you used the ocen.
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