When
Ms. Luria called my name I rushed down the class to answer her question. I felt
great, the question was do you want to (skipped) the lunch tub helper. Finally
I said yes and I did what was told.
Four
people were helping me: Aaron, Lexi, Marquis and me. A lunch tub helper gets
lunch tubs, it was fun and easy; it only takes one minute.
DeCorey,
ReplyDeleteI know that the first day of school is hard.
I like doing lunch tubs.
From,
Elena and Lily
You did a nice job telling how you felt when the teacher asked you to be the lunch tub helper. Also, you used a colon before listing who was helping. That is something I definitely did not know how to do at your age!
ReplyDeleteYou should also describe what the lunch tub helper actually does. Someone who is not in your class may not already know.
DeCorey-
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job with your punctuation, especially with your semicolon!
I think that your first paragraph is a little confusing, maybe try to describe what happens and then say how you felt.
Good job!
-Kait