Olivia
One
time I wanted to buy a laptop for $900! I looked in my piggy bank and I only
had $200! I had to earn the money by doing chores. First, I raked the leaves
for $2 and swept the house floors for another $2. Now I looked in my piggy bank
and I had $600. So I did some more chores for $300. I had enough money now.
With
my computer, I would do many things. First, I would show my friends, Next, I
would download some games, I would be proud of myself because I saved up the
money to buy it.
(This is a
pretend story)
Olivia
ReplyDeleteI liked how you told alot of details.
Fom Marquis
Olivia
ReplyDeleteI like your story and details.
from elijah.
Olivia,
ReplyDeleteI liked your story because you explained how you got the money.Plus I liked how you said what you would do with the computer.
From Afton
Olivia I Like your Writeting
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