Friday, December 7, 2012

De'Corey


De’corey
            There are 25 million trees cut down each year. This is a problem in Oregon because we need oxygen. We would not have clean air, animals can be affected by the dirty air because the trees get cut. Without air we cannot breath. If nothing changes we will die. Do you know what you can do to help trees? You can save the world and the air by planting tree. First you need seeds to put in the soil. Next you water it then you let it grow. If you cut down one you should plant another.
            Trees give animals food which makes paper but if you cut down too many, trees give us oxygen my action plan is to plant more trees in the woods or wherever people are cutting them down. And if you plant another tree. That will help the world. If they are not cutting down then you could plant 3 more plants. If there is no more trees then there is no more boxes, shelves, books, paper, tables and doors. Help our world by planting more trees in your garden backyard or park wherever you are you can plant trees. 



5 comments:

  1. Decorey
    I like how you said 25 millions of trees get cut down. You had good details in your pragrah.

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  2. Dear De'Corey,

    I like how you said that 25 million trees got cut down.

    Your best friend Lexi

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  3. De'Corey

    I like your store i like your writing you writ a lot.I like because you write a lot


    Daisy

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  4. De'Corey...wow...you are a terrific writer. I am so proud of you. Ms. Rachel would be proud too! Love, Ms. Foster

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  5. De'Corey,

    You have a lot to say and many facts to share. Some facts are being lost to run-on sentences. The rules of writing help you and all writers make their important points.

    Sarah

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