Mason
“Wasting food
is horrible.”
It
travels to a place called a landfills . There it gets burned in a incinerator
Sometimes when landfill sites are fall they leak and pollutes the earth, land
and water. If no one does anything about it we would live in a very polluted
city.
Have
you ever heard of composting? Composting is when you take food scraps such as
onion peels and eggshells and put them into leaves to make soil. You
can put scraps in worn bins. You also can feed scraps to chickens. My plan is
to compost everyday.
Mason is a good writer who needs to work a bit more on punctuation (for example, there's a missing period at the end of the second sentence). There are a couple of other rules of thumb that might help Mason. First, always read your work before you turn it in to catch errors like writing "fall" when you mean "full." Second, Try not to start two consecutive sentences with the same word; it makes a paragraph more interesting to start each sentence with a different word.
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