Wednesday, March 4, 2015

Sadie

Dear Ms. Luria,


Only one place would be exciting and educational. I think our class should go to OMSI for our field trip. OMSI is close to school, isn’t very expensive and there might be an exhibit about something we are learning.


OMSI is a great place to go because it isn’t very expensive. It is  $175. Besides, we would be able to go on other field trips this year because we still would have some money. OMSI is a great place to go.


I think that we should go to OMSI for our field trip because it is close to school and there might be an exhibit about something we’re learning. We’d be back in time to go home. It wouldn’t take a long time on the bus Also, they pro  ly have an exhibit about adaptations. Maybe we would answer some of our questions about adaptations there. OMSI is the best place to go!


I think our class should go to OMSI for our field trip. It is close to school. It isn’t very expensive and there might be an exhibit about something we’re learning. Therefore, OMSI is the only place where we can learn a lot and have a lot of fun!


Sincerely,

Sadie

2 comments:

  1. Point: Great idea to mention adaptations, which Iʻm guessing youʻre learning about in class.
    Question: What is OMSI? Is it a museum? Iʻm sure your teacher will know, but I want to know!
    -Jessie

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  2. i like how you wrote sincerly

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