Doug was a taxi driver except he drove a wagon. He usually didn’t get any business. Then 1 day a man and his daughter went on a ride on the wagon. Doug’s friend was fixing a fence near where they were riding.Doug was so happy. Then the horse heard a BOOM a big BOOM.The horse got scared and started running really fast.
Doug lost control of the horse and fell off.The man said,’’Oh no.’’
The man’s daughter screamed,’’Help help.’’Kate heard the girl and went to rescue her.she got on her horse .
The horse started running. Kate caught up with the wagon. Kate come down the horse and attached a rope to the horse to control the horse. The man and his daughter were now safe,now I will never ride with Doug again.
Point: It sounds like you know a lot about horses. I think it is unique that the taxi driver drives a wagon. "Doug was a taxi driver except he drove a wagon."
ReplyDeleteQuestion: I would like to know what the wagon looks like. What color is the wagon? Is the wagon made out of wood? Is it an old wagon? How many people can fit on the wagon?
Katie B.
Point: I like how you tell us that there was a loud boom! I can almost imagine the noise in my head! "Then the horse heard a BOOM a big BOOM."
ReplyDeleteQuestion: I really want to know what the horse looks like! Is it a boy or girl? And what color is it?
Meagan D.