Dear Ms. Luria,
Did you now that this place in fun and educational? It’s a great place to learn. I think our class should go to OMSI for are field trip. OMSI is close to school, it’s cheap and it is educational.
OMSI is the best place to go because it is educational. If we go to OMSI for are field trip. We could learn a lot about adaptations or what we are learning about in school. There are also lots of science experiments that we could do. When I go there with my family I learn a lot of stuff that I didn’t now before.
OMSI is the best place to go because it is close to school. It’s only 20 minutes away from school. Since we don’t know how much a school bus would cost it would just be 10 minutes longer if we take TRIMET.
Another reason we should go to OMSI is it is cheap. Each person costs 7 Dollars each. The Bus would cost 1 Dollar per person.
I think that our class should go to OMSI for our field trip. OMSI is close to school. It is also cheap and educational. OMSI is the best place to go for our field trip.
Sincerely,
Davis
You are a very good writer, Davis! You make really good arguments, and state your thoughts really well. One thing you might want to do in the future, though, is spell out acronyms (like OMSI) one time at the beginning (because silly people like me don't know what that is!). I really liked how you found some place for your field trip that is fun and educational.
ReplyDeleteDo you think that your choice is going to be fun for just you, or do you think your whole class would think that OMSI is a fun place to go? Sometimes it is good to think about how other people might feel about something we want to convince them of so we can address their concerns specifically.
When you go there with your family what is your favorite thing to do?
Jacie
Point: I really like your enthusiasm for OMSI, and that you have put together a well reasoned case for why your next field trip should be here. "OMSI is close to school. It is also cheap and educational."
ReplyDeleteQuestion: What science experiments do you enjoy doing at OMSI? What did you learn on your last visit?
Sarah Flynn Vilic.