Dear Ms. Luria,
There is only one place for a field trip that is both educational and fun. I think that our class should go to the zoo for their field trip. It’s close to the school. It’s close to the school. It’s fun. and it’s cheap.
It’s fun because we can learn a lot about animals. It’s fun because we can see animals. It’s fun because we can learn what they eat.
I think we should go to the zoo because we can learn how they communicate, how they move, how they eat.
Sincerely,
Ian
Point: I like how you made the arguments for going to the zoo ("Educational and fun", "fun and cheap"). Also, good use of repetition. I like how you repeatedly emphasized that it would be "fun"
ReplyDeleteQuestion: Exactly how much would it cost to go to the zoo?