Dear Ms. Luria,
The art museum is the best place to go because it is close to our school. We can spen more time there. It will take a little to get there. We will be on perfect timeing when we come back for dismissal. The art museum is the closest to our school. We might see a famous person. I relly love to learn artist names.
I think that we should go to the art museum. We might see a famous person. I love to learn artist names. Also it’s close to school. The art museum is the most, place to go because we can learn more art.
Sincerely,
Jesus
Point: It's interesting that you wrote "We might see a famous person," since that's not something people usually think about seeing at an art museum. It shows that you can really think outside the box!
ReplyDeleteQuestions: What else do you think you might see at an art museum? Are there other things would you like to learn at the museum besides the artists' names?
Callie H.
Jesus, I love that you have such a passion for art, artists and the museum close to your school! This sentence really shows your enthusiasm: " I think that we should go to the art museum."
ReplyDeleteI am wondering what kind of famous people you would like to meet at the art museum? Would they be an artist?
Skye
Point: I really like that you did not only think about what would be the most fun, but also what is the most practical. It's a very good point that by choosing somewhere nearby you can spend more time there. "We can spen more time there."
ReplyDeleteQuestion: Do you already have a favourite artist? What type of art are you hoping to see at the museum?
Ms. Goodfellow
Point: I like your reason for wanting to take a field trip to the art museum. "I love to learn artist names."
ReplyDeleteQuestion: Who is your favourite artist? Do you have a favourite painting?
Sarah Flynn Vilic.