My favorite food is rice. These mushy little specks of white are delicious. Rice can have many things on it like butter, sauces, and can be mixed with other things. I like white rice plain, no butter, no nothing!
I like rice because it doesn't have a really strong flavor, but it still has some flavor. It also so has a wet kind of feel. I wish I could eat rice more often.
Point: I like that you used your senses to describe rice. For example, you explained the texture of rice in your mouth. "It also so has a wet kind of feel."
ReplyDeleteQuestion: I want to know more about the smell of rice. Does the smell of rice remind you of home? Do you think rice has a specific smell?
Katie B.
Very fun read!
ReplyDeleteHave you tried saffron rice? That is my favorite kind of rice.
C
Point: I really liked the sentence where you described the different types of things you can eat rice with. I thought it was very descriptive. "Rice can have many things on it like butter, sauces, and can be mixed with other things."
ReplyDeleteQuestion: One question I have for you is, what is your favourite thing to eat rice with? I know you said that you like to your rice plain, and without anything on it. But if you had to choose something to put on it, what would that be?
Wania
I like how you use great words to describe the rice and how much you like it! "mushy little specks of white" is a good example!
ReplyDeleteI can tell you really love rice. Do you love rice pudding too? That's a sweet kind of rice you can have for dessert. If you don't know it, you should try it!
Gemma
Point: Hi Patrick! I like how you describe the rice as "mushy" and "wet." I could almost taste rice in my mouth as I read your description.
ReplyDeleteQuestion: What are some of your other favorite foods? Do you only like foods that have a plain taste?
--Miss O'Brien
(a middle school teacher in Ohio)
Hello, Patrick!
ReplyDeletePoint: I really liked the sentence "These mushy little specks of white are delicious". What a creative way to describe rice!
Question: Do you have any favorite dessert? If so, what is it?
Best wishes!
Ms. Carolina (right from Brazil)
Point: I like how you described different things to mix with rice. Sounds delicious! "Rice can have many things on it like butter, sauces, and can be mixed with other things."
ReplyDeleteQuestion: What is your favorite food to eat plain white rice with?
Good job!
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My favorite part is when you said These mushy little specks of white are delicious. from Curtis
ReplyDeleteI like how you said why you like rice.
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