Saturday, September 17, 2011
Reese
When I grow up, I want to be a bmx racer. I want to do this because my cousin wants me to. Also, because it looks awesome. I can get more money, and I like doing stunts. I do tail wips and jumps. It’s all very hard. I rise bikes with my friend Shawn. Me doing all this stuff, leads to my sister daring me to do something. Like one time she dared to me to push Shawn in a stroller. I really like to do stunts this is why I want to be a bmx racer.
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Good job. A really good sentence was "Me doing all this stuff, leads to my sister daring me to do something." I just think that the sentence after that shouldn't have started with "Like". Overall, this is a well written essay.
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