When I grow up, I would like to be a motorcycle rider. I would like to do it because it would be fun to go off bumps and jumps and travel around the world.
I would travel around the world. I would travel to any motorcycle race there would be. I don’t care where I would go.
I would also like to get prizes like awards, nicknames, or anything. I would like to be a motorcycle rider because there would be lots of competition.
Good stuff! I like it. A couple of comments:
ReplyDelete1. "nicknames, or anything" are not really prizes. Maybe try replacing that with "trophies, or medals."
2. Adjectives can really give color to your sentences. Next time, try adding a few adjectives here and there and see where that takes you. For example: "exciting bumps and jumps" or "fierce competition."
Keep it up!