My fights would be everywhere in America.
Saturday, September 17, 2011
The Hurracain - Jacy
When I grow up I want to be a professional wrestler. My name would be the Hurracain. I would be a legend. My signature move would be a twist on his arm and then a slam on his head. I’d love my job. I would invite my family to a match. My name would be the Hurracain because I would mess up every one who fought me.
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Nice job, "Hurricain"! I liked when you described what your signature move would be. I just think that the conclusion could've been a little more special instead of just "My fights would be everywhere in America". Your a great writer ")
ReplyDeleteDear Hurricane,
ReplyDeleteYour signature move sounds painful! Nice description!
Maybe the conclusion could be stronger( like you)and remember to check your spelling. I wonder what your outfit looks like when you are in the ring...