Violet
My most unforgettable experience at school was when I was in 2nd grade. It was the first day of school I was a little nervous and my teacher was very nice her name was Miss Shwall We did class points and teachers points. And the next week the whole class one we eat popsicles and watched a movie after school. When everyone went home she gave me a piece of bubble gum
I like how you told us details about your 2nd grade experience. It was really easy to follow, which makes it fun to read. It sounds like your unforgettable experience was more than just the first day of school because it includes the next week, too. It would be good to say that your unforgettable experience was the first couple weeks of school or something like that.
ReplyDeleteHi Violet,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you talked about all the things that made the first days of school unforgettable.
You talked about points. You said, "We did class points and teachers points." Can you explain how the class and teacher get points? Sometimes people don't have the same experiences that you have so it's important to describe or explain what you mean.
Good job. Keep writing!
Mrs. M