Wednesday, October 12, 2011
Brylynn
I went hunting for deer at night. Then I saw a firework. Then I went shopping for some shoes and shirts. Then I lost my grandma at the of 7. In the day I found money on the floor it was a 20 dollar bill. I like to play football, and I still love my grandma and I miss her a lot and I saw a deer when I was hunting when I got home. When I heard a baby crying ask it is ear baby venle. Now I have a new bike to ride.
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Brylynn,
ReplyDeleteYou put your heart into your writing, and that is just so awesome!I don't know about you, but I write like I talk; I am a little bit all over the place; it takes me so long to tell a short story. My advice to you, and myself, is to type all of your thoughts down, and then before posting organize them into some sort of either timeline or subject matter.
Congratulations on your online publication!
-Erin
Brylynn,
ReplyDeleteI would love to know what things you see when you ride your bike. And do you see something new every time you ride?
Nancy
I'm very sorry to hear about your grandma. I hope you and your family still do things to remember her life and how she was a part of your life. When you get older, maybe you can keep the same traditions and do the things your grandma used to do with you. --Jill
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