Violet
One of my favorite
breakfast is oatmeal. You don’t need many ingredients. If you cook
it for too long, it will be burning hot. The ingredients are: a
quarter bowl of oatmeal, a little bit of water, and a little bit of
brown sugar. You don’t put too much brown sugar in because it will
hurt your teeth.
Thank you for the brown sugar tip Violet. I didn't know that too much will hurt my teeth - excellent to include so much detail in your writing - those kinds of details make it very interesting to read. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you detailed how much brown sugar to use, and why it's important not to use too much.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing this Violet! I tried your recipe and it was delicious! You are a great writer and have some helpful tips too. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteVery nice description of the ingredients, Violet, this recipe sounds delicious!
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