Saturday, April 14, 2012

Taylor

“Easter Bunny”
    The tiny white bunny hopped to deliver some Easter eggs at 1:00 pm to nice kids but he breaks his small leg. He borrowed a small robot leg from his very nice friend. When he borrowed the small robot leg he walked slower than a snail because he was trying to go to the big hospital so they can put on the small robot leg.
    When he got to the big hospital he waited until the nice people to tell him to go in. One hour later, it’s time for him to go in.  When they were done he told him to pay them twelve small Easter eggs. Then he got out of the hospital,
    “I am too far to get there; I wish I had a super speed.”  The Easter bunny said.
    And when he says wish it come true. So he was going super speed. When he gets to one hundred houses his job was done

2 comments:

  1. Great story!

    I really like how you had the bunny pay the hospital with Easter Eggs. "When they were done he told him to pay them twelve small Easter eggs."

    What color were the eggs?

    Corinna

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  2. Wonderful, uplifting story about the bunny rabbit! :)

    I love how "nice people" are involved in the whole story which tells us that if you are nice, good things will happen to you and your wishes will all come true. "He borrowed a small robot leg from his very nice friend." and "...he waited until the nice people to tell him to go in."

    I am wondering if when you say that the bunny rabbit was going at super speed, are you thinking about Batman or Flash or Superman in your head?

    Keep it up!

    Hena

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