Sunday, April 15, 2012

Keziah

    The fluffy plump bunny hopped weirdly on Easter. It hopped weirdly because it was giving out different kinds of candy and multi-colored eggs. The problem was it hopped to slow. The fluffy bunny wondered quickly what it would do.
    “Oh I’ll just go to the super market and buy a fast motorcycle and a sling shot.” The bunny said.
    Both item costs thirty and twenty five cents with a total of sixty and fifty cents.

2 comments:

  1. Keziah,

    I loved your story! You had a great use of details when describing your bunny and other items. You had a problem in your story, which you solved in a fun and creative way with the motorcycle and sling shot. This story made me smile, so thank you!

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  2. Hi Keziah! I loved how descriptive your story was! Using words such as "fluffy" and "plump" gave me a great idea of what the bunny looked like!

    I am also very impressed with your math skills! I enjoyed how you listed the items the bunny wanted to buy and calculated the price! Great job!

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