Esmeralda was very happy to get some painted eggs. That night she walked home. She stayed up decorating all one hundred twenty eggs with flowers. She went to sleep at 1:00 Am. She woke up,
“Oh no I’m late!” Esmeralda said.
Ten minutes later she went to a house. She hurried and went to the next house. She was almost done delivering eggs.
The fluffy old bunny hopped away from her yellow and pink home. She hopped because she had to deliver some Easter eggs. She was very happy to give Easter eggs out. She saw all the nice kids asleep.
Later that day Esmeralda the bunny ran out of eggs.
“Oh no what am I supposed to do?” She asked herself.
Later that night she walked a mile. She found a market called Eggs for the Easter fun. She picked up blue boxes. They came in twelve with some cool Easter paint.
Hi Lanaireoje,
ReplyDeletePoint: I really like your story. It shows that the bunny is very happy when trying to make the kids happy.
Question: It was not very clear to me at the beginning of the story that Esmeralda was a bunny, I thought it was a little girl.
Ilhame O.