“The Bunny”
The fluffy white bunny hopped to the market to buy toys and stuff to eat for her kids. Then she saw men that kill rabbits. Then eat the rabbits but the rabbits got out of the store and ran to her home. The men lost the rabbit.The next day she went to the market again and she saw the men again. The bunny saw the men and ran from the shop. Then the bunny placed a trap for the men. He ran in the trap.
“Bunny; I won’t kill you if you take us out of here.” the men said.
“Ok I will come out,” the bunny said.
He took the bunny out of the trap. They became friends forever. The man never again killed rabbits.
Exciting story!
ReplyDeleteI really like when you have the bunny trap the men. "Then the bunny placed a trap for the men."
What kind of trap was it? How did it keep the men from getting out?
Corinna
Armando, I loved the way you turned the tables to give us a dramatic idea of what it's like to be caught in a trap. And I liked that even after trying to hurt each other, they were able to become frineds.
ReplyDeleteBut I wonder if when you wrote "He took the bunny out of the trap," you meant to say "She took the man out of the trap."