The white zombie bunny started a huge army of zombies yesterday. He called the swat team.
“There’s a big riot of zombies.” The bunny said.
Next, the swat came and started to fight the dumb zombies with camo guns and tanks. The zombies now had camo swat people on their side. The swat kept on having more and more reinforcements.
“Oh no!” the lady cried.
“All the swat team is gone!” the boy yelled.
The dumb zombies have won.
A white zombie bunny is certainly an original idea.How did the bunny become a zombie? How did he start a huge army of zombies? Why were the zombies dumb? A few more details would give the reader a better grasp of the event.
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ReplyDeleteI love your imagination and creativity. I also like zombies! I think you have great potential to become a famous writer. Maybe even write movies or television shows! Keep up the great work!