“Easter Bunny”
The fluffy chocolate bunny hopped. It was Easter at ten thirty and he needed to deliver eggs. He broke his leg from tripping over a branch. He screamed loudly. “The Easter bunny did not get a cast!” he cried.
Finally he got up and bought a space ship from Albertsons. The ship cost two thousand creamed eggs. It was a blue green and red. After that he flew away to give out the rest of the eggs for Easter.
Great job, Jacy! I enjoyed how you described the colors of the space ship. Being able to picture what you are describing in your story makes reading it very exciting! It's too bad the bunny tripped and broke his leg, but I liked how you thought of a creative solution - buying a space ship - to make sure the bunny could still get around! Wonderful story!
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