Brylynn
Did you know that Nike gives the Oregon ducks new outfits, shoes and helmets almost three years? The Oregon ducks are going to the Rose Bowl. They won against west Wisconsin. After that they went to their families and had a big festival. There was food and music.
Football is obviously important to the writer. Suggest the writer replace Oregon ducks with the Oregon Duck football players. Suggest adding some description by adding the time period for the Rose Bowl (New Years' Day). Replace After that . . . with: After an exciting football game, the players joined their families for a big festival.
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