Aaron
“The knight and the Dragon”
Narrator:
Once upon a time there was a king and queen sitting on the throne.
The
king: That dragon was been here for 110 years.
Dragon:
(get up, flies covver to the castle and starts breathing fire)
Wizard:
(He casted a spell and made a forcefield)
Narrator:
The wizzard tried to keep it up as long as he could. Unfortunately, he couldn’t
hold too much longer. The Wizard get the knight immed
at ciyana the knight suited up.
King:
The dragon is getting away, you must follow that dragon!
Knight:
I will do my king.
Narrator: The king smiled at the knight and the
drawbridge opened. The knight faced off the dragon, and the knight won the face
off but the dragon is still alive.
Dragon:
( goes back to the castle and starts to breath fire)
Narrator:
The kn ight tried to take him out for good, but it didn’t work
King:
Take him out once and for all!
Narrator:
So maybe the dragon is dead or not but their people are safe.
“The End”
Hi, Aaron--
ReplyDeleteYou wrote your story a little bit like a screenplay for a movie. I can imagine what it would look like. I was trying to figure out what the words that are in red meant, and I wondered if you meant to write "Get the knight I met at Ciyana"?
Do you like stories where the fights are described in a lot of detail (or movies where they are shown for a lot of time?) I can imagine this fight going on for a lot longer and being very dramatic. Maybe another time you can tell us more about what happened. I'm glad that the people were safe at the end of the story.
Crossing Rebecca
Hi Aaron, I really enjoyed your story and Rebecca is right, it does sound like a great movie. You have some very interesting characters and my favourite was the Wizard even though his force field didn't keep the dragon away.
ReplyDeleteThe Knight sounds very brave and I liked how they did a face off. It was good that the people were safe but the dragon wasn't killed. Maybe you could write a sequel?
Maybe the knight can talk to the dragon and become friends with it and ask the dragon not to breath fire onto the castle.
Why does'nt the dragon attack again? You may want to write about that.
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