“Weekend Plans”
Two things I’m doing this weekend are play video games and play soccer. One of my weekend plans is playing video games. I am playing Halo Reach the video game. Another of my weekend plan is playing soccer. I will play with my friends.
Taylor, your verbs need to match, i.e. doing and play do not match so it doesn't flow well. You want to say "Two things I'm doing this week are playing video games and playing soccer." You followed that rule in the next few sentences and the conclusion sentence needs to be playing also. It just makes it have better flow and reads better. Very good!!! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHi Taylor. It's good that you're doing a mixture of active stuff (playing soccer) and relaxing (playing video games). Is Halo Reach a good video game? I must admit that I have never heard of it!
ReplyDeleteOver here in England, we call soccer "football." As you can imagine, this confuses many Americans!
-- Peter