Friday, October 17, 2014

Eleanor

Hi.  I am a gremlin.  I borrowed a wing monster and jumped in a house.  I am hiding from the police in a boot and I am scared out of my mind.  The gremlin police came and I almost got captured.  I jumped over the comb like bars of the jail and escaped.  I ran and ran but they were on my tail, literally on my tail.  I was almost to my boot but then ….eek!  Help! The wing monster is back!

2 comments:

  1. Eleanor:

    So glad to see the word "literally" used the correct way. Some people use the word to mean "figuratively" and its wrong. Good job!

    Why is the wing monster bad?

    --AP

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  2. hey eleanor,
    you have a great story! your friends ayla & wren

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