Tuesday, December 11, 2012

Evan


          I love going to Denver! I feel lots of heat and a nice summer breeze. I love jumping on my cousins’ trampoline with cold hose water spraying from the side. I also like my grandmas’ sweet pancakes. I like going to the cold water pool.
          You see people going to and from work. You hear people having conversations and saying hi. When you go to restaurants you taste sweet juice. I love going to Denver!
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  1. PeaceDecember 13, 2012 at 5:13 AM

    You love Denver! Your enthusiasm is fantastic. You have lots of great things to tell us in your writing and it's very descriptive; but I would like to see all of those thoughts organized a little better next time. Kepp things that are alike together. That makes it easier to read.

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 11, 2013 at 1:03 PM

    I like your story about Denver.

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  3. Matthew SmithJanuary 14, 2013 at 10:32 AM

    Nice job, Evan. I also love going to Denver.

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