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love taking a walk in the forest on a beautiful spring day. I hear branches
rustling above my head and I see spring flowers blowing. As I walk toward the
cool, rushing creek. Dry crackly twigs snap beneath my feet I feel the dull
green leaves brush against my sides and I glimpse the creek through the lush
undergrowth. Beautiful bird song floats through the cool breezy air. This
forest is a truly special place for me.
I love your word choice. You have described every element in great detail. You have enlightened my senses as I listen to the branches, see the flowers, feel the leaves, and hear the bird. This is a sign of a very good writer.
ReplyDeleteYou've really captured a brisk, fall walk! I could almost hear the branches rustling!
ReplyDeleteGreat use of adjectives! Watch your sentence structure though. There are two fragments in this one paragraph, and one run-on sentence.
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