Kitty and De’Corey
Kitty, the T-rex, was 9 months old and he lived with
De’Corey. In a house that De’Corey
built. Shhh, Kitty has a secret. He hates De’Corey, but like me. De’Corey plays basketball well. Kitty plays with a little plays with a little
basketball hoop. De’Corey is really good
at it. Kitty never likes tag, tag is for
babies. He has a bad habit, farting too
much.
Kitty has a friend. His friend is a dog. He lives next door. One day the dog missing. Kitty knows he likes trees. He looks in the trees but the dog is not
there. He looks by the dead
spiders. That’s where he found the dog
hiding. He was playing
hide-and-go-seek. He felt happy that he
found him.
I missed that you were talking about a T-rex - so the pictures I made in my mind at first were of a KITTY!! Very clever writing, DeCorey. I am curious who the "me" is that the T-rex LIKES, since you say he does not like DeCorey. mmmmm I wonder!
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I missed that you were talking about a T-rex - so the pictures I made in my mind at first were of a KITTY!! Very clever writing, DeCorey. I am curious who the "me" is that the T-rex LIKES, since you say he does not like DeCorey. mmmmm I wonder!
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I liked that you named a T-Rex, such a great and powerful creature, Kitty. I thought that was very funny. I'm was happy to read that Kitty found a dog as a friend. I was surprised to hear he found the dog with a bunch of spiders! Creative writing. I would try to be a little bit more clear of your characters so it is easier for the reader to get to know them better. Good Job.
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