A Person I Admire
A person I admire is my brother. He is a nice person. He’s also funny.
My brother is nice because he baked a cake with his girlfriend Terra. She put little bit of sprinkles, but my brother just poured the whole thing on the cake.
My brother is funny one time when we were going to the store, we were telling jokes. He made us laugh a lot. We could not stop laughing.
I will always respect my brother.
Karla,
ReplyDeleteYou are lucky to have such a great brother. I can't wait to read your next piece of writing!
Ms. L
I really liked your story, and I bet it made your brother very happy when you showed it to him (I hope you did show it to him!). You have a nice way of writing. Keep writing!
ReplyDeletei like your story by jenny
ReplyDeletePoint: I like the part you wrote about your brother adding more sprinkles to the cake. "She put little bit of sprinkles, but my brother just poured the whole thing on the cake."
ReplyDeleteYour brother sounds like a lot of fun!
Question: Is your brother older then you? What grade is he in?
Lina H