My most unforgettable experience at school was when I was in 3 grade
My teacher Mr. B was the best teacher because he was nice with all the students and he never said a bad word and he never yelled to us because he was the best teacher and he helped us all the time because he was a very good teacher with me and the students
Great job! I loved reading about your best teacher. You did a great job explaining why Mr. B was great teacher.
ReplyDeleteI would like to offer a few suggestions. You should always end your sentences with a period. It looks like you left one out at on your first sentence. I would also break your second paragraph into a few sentences. This will prevent you from having a run on sentence.
But you did a wonderful job! I hope you keep it up.
Your story tells us what's students remember about their favorite teachers: being nice, never saying a bad word, never yelling, and being helpful. Sometimes teachers don't know what their students think, so this is a good lesson for all teachers! Good job.
ReplyDeleteHi Armando,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great start to telling us about your teacher. I think it would be great if you could give us one example of a day when your teacher was nice. Tell us about a time when he helped the class. How did it make you feel?
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