When I grow up, I want to be a vet. I would like take care of animals. I love to help animals and I like to see them. I am going to get a pet or I might even get three pets. That is what I want to do when I grow up. Here are more reasons why I like animals. They are silly, cute, huggable, sweet, playful and love to explore. They are nice and love to eat. I love walking them at the park and playing fetch at the park I carry them and hold them. I play outside with them while I make food and water to drink. They nap while I do this. I love animals so now you know what I want to do when I grow up.
Rock on. Good start! I love animals too, especially cats. A few comments:
ReplyDelete1. I thought the sentence about "I am going to get a pet or I might even get three pets" is great. I laughed out loud when I read this.
2. There's a missing period somewhere in this paragraph. Can you find it? It's before "I carry them and hold them."
3. I think you're missing the word "to" here: "I would like to take care of animals."
Keep it up! Next time, try telling us what your favorite animal is, and give us some details on why it's your favorite.