Wednesday, February 25, 2015

Ayla

Why birthday parties are dangerous - a true story by Ayla
Once upon a time, I (me)  went to a  birthday party. It was very fun we got to eat pizza and  cupcakes.  But wait, i   haven't  gotten  to  to the  dangerous part yet. We  also  did mad libs.  Mad libs are stories with blanks in them, so little red riding hood  turned into little slimy riding pants.                                                                                              

At the end of the party we  had  a dance  party.(dance parties are  dangerous!!!!) but who could resist?! So I danced. I looove dance . We danced around a  girl  named wren. It was a lot of fun until tried to spin while the  circle around  wren  was moving. I fell to  the  ground  ‘aaa!’ It hurt literally! Hospital time!

  WARNING! Birthday parties are dangerous!
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 5, 2015 at 10:45 AM

    I really like the sentence :Hospital time!
    The way you expressed it.

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  2. AnonymousMarch 6, 2015 at 10:55 AM

    I like how you WARNING! WARNING! Birthday parties are dangerous!
    Eliza

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  3. AnonymousMarch 12, 2015 at 1:00 PM

    Oh are you ok,but I loved the story

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