How the Watch Got Down the
Toilet
By Sarah Neel
“Honey, Syd and Clarence need food and
water. I’m leaving!” Dad left the house.
Mom
came downstairs. “Wait,” she said to our
cats. “I’m not dressed.” She laughed and went back upstairs.
Mom
came downstairs. She was wearing her old
watch. She took off her watch and put in
on the counter. Then she fed the cats.
“Mommy,
I need help starting the shower.” I
called from the bathroom.
Mom
went down the hall to help me. She forgot
her watch.
Syd
noticed the watch first. She jumped up
onto the kitchen counter, grabbed the watch and jumped back down.
Clarence noticed that Syd had the
watch. He started tugging it away from
Syd. Syd tugged back. It was like tug-a-war for cats.
Mom
left the bathroom after helping me start the shower. She left the bathroom door open.
Syd
and Clarence tugged their way down the hall.
Clarence pulled he and Syd into the bathroom.
I
heard the bathroom door creak. I saw Syd
and Clarence playing tug-a-war with something.
I couldn’t tell what because the bathroom was misty.
“Mom, Syd and Clarence are playing
with something,” I shouted. She couldn’t
hear me. I didn’t care.
Syd
gave up. Or I least I thought so. She jumped onto the toilet seat and let go of
the watch.
Clarence
looked very pleased with himself. He
trotted around the bathroom, waving the watch in Syd’s face.
Then
Clarence suddenly realized I was in the room.
He let go of the watch to go see me.
The watch flung into the air and landed onto the
toilet.
Syd
quickly grabbed the watch and hopped onto the flusher area. But then she saw a box of tissues. She loved
tissues.
She
immediately dropped the watch so she could play with the tissues. The watch had been dropped in the
toilet. I knew it fell because I heard a
plop.
The
object had fallen.
Syd
stopped playing with tissues. Clarence
stopped sniffing me. Syd took a step and
her paw pushed on the flusher.
Oh
no I thought.
“Sarah!”
my mother called. “Time to get dressed!”
I
hopped back into the shower as my mom came in.
“Alright
time to get out,” my mom said, closing the door. She turned off the shower and picked me
up. She took me upstairs to my
room.
“Sarah
do you know where my watch went?”
Ohhh I thought.
THAT was what went down the toilet.
“Um
the cats flushed it down the toilet.”
My mom laughed.
“You have the greatest imagination, Sarah bear.” She rubbed my head.
My
mom never did look in the sewer for it.
great writing and punctuation and detail
ReplyDeleteThis is a well written story. There is good use of imagery so that I really could imagine this happening. The title is perfect to set the tone of what to expect.
ReplyDeleteThat was a funny story .
ReplyDeletefrom Eleanor
Thanks!
Deletefrom Sarah
love that story
ReplyDelete