Bibi

Dear Ms. Luria,

          There is only one place for a field trip that is both educational and fun.  I think our class should go to the art museum for our field trip.  We can learn about famous artists and what their paintings are about.  The art museum probably has awesome paintings.

          I think the art museum is a good idea because we can see what artist paintings look like.  The art museum seems like it is awesome.  It would be educational if people talked to the class about artists’ paintings and how beautiful they are.  The art museum probably has beautiful art.  I think it has awesome art even though I have never been there. 

          I think our class should go to the art museum for our field trip.  We can learn about famous artists.  Also we can learn what their paintings looked like.  Therefore the art museum is the most educational also it is fun.

          I think our class should go to the art museum for our field trip.  We can learn about famous artists.  Also we can learn about what their paintings mean.  The art museum seems like it has awesome exciting paintings, also it is close to school. In addition we have to get to school in time for dismissal.  Therefore the art museum is the most educational, also it is really fun.

          Sincerely,

                   Bibi